I'm not an expert in Goa psytrance, but I shall try to help.
This track is nice.
Interesting use of sounds and sound effects in this track.
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The bass melody synth+drum sound is nice too.
But the only problem with it, is that,
it is a slight bit too loud and as the music progresses, it overpowers
and drowns out the other cool melodies and sound effects playing in the track.
Suggestion: Lower the volume of both the drum and bass a bit, when other melodies etc.
are playing, or are about to play. So that the other melodies and sounds can be heard.
Or, when other synth sounds are playing or about to play, use the
Lmms' Automation feature, to lower the volume of the Bass+drum when other instruments are playing. So they won't clash/overpower/drown out, each other.
Also, when making some music tracks, try to make them not too loud. He! He!
And not so repetitive. In this case, the Bass sound.
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Nice fade out with the cymbal clash, at
10:52 secs onward.
Very cool!
Note: Alot more can be done and added to this track,to make it sound even cooler.
But all in all, the music I have heard from you so far sound good.
So far this is my favourite track from you:
https://soundcloud.com/asakuradespisesk ... iginal-mix
Use it as a guide.
You did alot of things right in this track.