My very first songs

[ferropython]

https://5minuteslaughing.bandcamp.com/

When i was writing "BAD EP", I haven't even known about major and minor scales.
When i was writing "C****y House Without Cover Art Which You Won't Even Download" I have known about that scales, and tried to use minor.

Now I know very tiny piece of music theory.

I know that songs are bad. But please check both of them and then please tell me what's wrong.

P. S. I know about that some instruments in both songs are not in harmony.
P. P. S orry for that English

[musikbear]

I liked your fine instrumental sound, and that you do not have clippings. Well done.
In your Bad EP it is not that important with scale and key (remember key:) because it is ??step, and in the various 'step' genres anything goes. ??stem depends on noise and growls, but first and foremost timing.

Your C*** house track has same fine instrumental production. I think you need to study melody-structure, and work more on that.
For more music-theory i recommend http://www.8notes.com/
There are a lot of similar websites but 8notes is good.
I also believe that this topic can be of use for you
http://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=1685

Finally, you will get more 'reviews' if you use lmms group on soundcloud:
https://soundcloud.com/groups/lmms

[Eino]

https://5minuteslaughing.bandcamp.com/

When i was writing "BAD EP", I haven't even known about major and minor scales.
When i was writing "C****y House Without Cover Art Which You Won't Even Download" I have known about that scales, and tried to use minor.

Now I know very tiny piece of music theory.

I know that songs are bad. But please check both of them and then please tell me what's wrong.

P. S. I know about that some instruments in both songs are not in harmony.
P. P. S orry for that English

I agree with Musikbear, you need to study up on melody structure, but not so bad for your first compositions.
I have been studying musical theory for years, and I throw out the rules, when it comes to composing music.

[ferropython]

I liked your fine instrumental sound, and that you do not have clippings.

I don't have clippings -> song is very quiet.
In c****y house track I tried to use limiter, but song also was not enough loud.
I don't understand how the artists (Alan Walker, Martin Garrix, ..., Knife Party, Skrillex, Dirtyphonics, <some TRUE dub/drum step artists>....) do songs so loud (with clipping), but these songs don't sound mad.
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Thanks, i'll try to learn musical theory, but I speak Russian so I won't (and I don't now) undrestand properly http://www.8notes.com/

And I don't understand properly this viewtopic.php?f=4&t=1685

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I agree with Musikbear, you need to study up on melody structure, but not so bad for your first compositions.
I have been studying musical theory for years, and I throw out the rules, when it comes to composing music.

I don't really understand how to make great music using only imagination and "throwing out the rules"...
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Thanks for reviews, though. [sentence wasn't designed to be rude]
P. S. Too many words "understand"

[Eino]

I don't really understand how to make great music using only imagination and "throwing out the rules"...

Once you get an good understanding of musical theory, It comes second nature. The imagination will do the rest.

[ferropython]

I don't really understand how to make great music using only imagination and "throwing out the rules"...

Once you get an good understanding of musical theory, It comes second nature. The imagination will do the rest.

Well, maybe, I'll make music like you make in farthest future..