1st music shared in forum

[Ariss]

Hi
It's my first time posting here..
I have been learning music and how to use LMMS for a year and half but never share my music here except on LSP ..

So, here it is
https://soundcloud.com/heleazar-james/a ... grand-bleu

Personally, I rate it 2 out of 5 stars..
Just need your comment or opinion for things that I can fix, improve or add later..
Thanks

Sorry for any mistakes. English is not my native language..

[B4CKW4RD]

This is very nice! Great job.
Mixed also pretty well!
I like the chillish feeling you gave to it.
5/5 for me

[Eino]

Hi
It's my first time posting here..
I have been learning music and how to use LMMS for a year and half but never share my music here except on LSP ..

So, here it is
https://soundcloud.com/heleazar-james/a ... grand-bleu

Personally, I rate it 2 out of 5 stars..
Just need your comment or opinion for things that I can fix, improve or add later..
Thanks

Sorry for any mistakes. English is not my native language..

Welcome to LMMS.
You have relaxing melody's
It's more like ambient music, than rock. I rate it 4 out of five for your first.
Great job at producing this one.

[Ariss]

Thanks for the feedback and also for the generous rating..

I made it only with the native instrument in LMMS..
So, feel free to check it in LMMS LSP....

[brandystarbrite]

Welcome to Lmms Forums Ariss.
Lovely epic beautiful calming music.
I give it a 4.9 out of 5.
This track sounds very Japanese style.
And you even used, a lovely epic nature scenery picture, that suits the music too.
Great music, lovely pic.

PS: The kick drum sounds a slight bit too soft.
So if you want, I suggest, raising the kick drums volume a bit, to make it a a slight tad bit louder/harder.
But despite that, the kick drum, sounds good, the way it is.