Hi, I have been using LMMS for fun for the past couple of months. I am looking for some feedback on a track I'm making and what I could do to improve the track and my skill in general.
My music background: Played "Music" (Playstation 1, I think US version had a different name) when I was very little. Played Music 3000 (Playstation 2) as a teenager. Failed basic high school music and didn't really pick up... well, any of it really, never even learned to play an instrument but the theory was especially hard. Also not a huge music listener, only very recently started listening again, last time I consistently listened to music was about 10 years ago.
Now with that boring but necessary info out of the way, here's my first track I feel comfortable sharing: (Edit 8 Sept 2016: I added a second one, a bit more unusual and slow but actually started developing before the first one posted)
https://soundcloud.com/user-412254415/asdfglkasjd
https://soundcloud.com/user-412254415/a ... p-feedback
I appreciate all feedback, but would especially appreciate feedback that can be reasonably understood by a layperson. Thanks all who took the time to listen!
My music background: Played "Music" (Playstation 1, I think US version had a different name) when I was very little. Played Music 3000 (Playstation 2) as a teenager. Failed basic high school music and didn't really pick up... well, any of it really, never even learned to play an instrument but the theory was especially hard. Also not a huge music listener, only very recently started listening again, last time I consistently listened to music was about 10 years ago.
Now with that boring but necessary info out of the way, here's my first track I feel comfortable sharing: (Edit 8 Sept 2016: I added a second one, a bit more unusual and slow but actually started developing before the first one posted)
https://soundcloud.com/user-412254415/asdfglkasjd
https://soundcloud.com/user-412254415/a ... p-feedback
I appreciate all feedback, but would especially appreciate feedback that can be reasonably understood by a layperson. Thanks all who took the time to listen!