orpheon7 wrote:Bad things I notice about
http://soundcloud.com/brian-amin/moar-shiz-with-lb302 :
-The beginning is a bit too dissonant for my ears (see this thread:
https://sourceforge.net/apps/phpbb/lmms ... ?f=4&t=656 )
-The wooooaaaaaeeeeiiiiiis (no idea what they're called officially) are too loud for me around 1:18, and the last one is one too much (again, in my ears).
-The bass is sort of strange. I'm fine with that, but dance music usually is more effective if you use another bass (you can have more than one if you master them properly) on the offbeat.
-The main leading pattern/melody isn't really that sticking for me, not sure what exactly is wrong with it.
-The mixing is pretty inconsistent in my ears, but maybe that's because of any differences between your and my speakers.
(giving only negative critique because that's what helps you. Don't think I consider you to be horrible!
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Style-wise, I would've said techno, maybe even trance. It's too fast for house and doesn't have enough bass for all the bass genres. Marking it as EDM isn't wrong either.
That was my 2nd WIP, and I went beyond that, 20 days ago, lol, I updated it:
http://soundcloud.com/brian-amin/even-moar-shiz-wip-3
It's EDM, over that month I talked to some friends I met online, learned more about classifying my own music, its EDM.
The Beginning panning of the WIP 2 is a bit..stupid, I agree, I didn't even try on that part.
The WOOOIEEEHS, its called an Uplifter, I toned it down, I originally added a flanger plugin, which made it loud and obnoxious, I took it out in the 3rd one, thanks
Most of my music is never bass heavy, I try not to focus on it. But in WIP 4 (Haven't uploaded it yet), I improve on it greatly
Thanks for bashing my music lol. I'm not saying this in a mean or horrible way lol. I really like it when people give me their opinions on what sucks in a song. From this I try to fix that problem and go beyond it.
Thanks.