First song

[maddogfinland]

https://soundcloud.com/maddog-15/rispedioni
https://soundcloud.com/maddog-15/waldo

Comments please...

[brandystarbrite]

LUV this song very much!!
Rispedioni is Lovely!
How come I missed this song, in March? Hmmm...............

Nice build up, and I Luv start up from 13 secs to 23 secs. That would make a good startup for a Trance Project I'm working on.
Oh wait.......it is a Trance Techno song. No wonder it sounds so Great! Lol!
A little bit more, and this song would be even better!

How did you make the sounds from 13 secs to 23 secs etc?
And the strange saw bass at the end of it too?

All in all, Lovely music. Keep up the good work.
It's nice to see some Trance Techno songs on the Lmms Forum.

[brandystarbrite]

Waldo is very Dance Jumpy!!
Wow! Love the Start up from 0 secs to 21 secs.

What's with the pause in the song at 3:42 secs to 3:49 secs?
Lol! I almost thought the song was over.
Nearly gave me a Lmms Heart Attack too! Lol!

I think the back ground "Cymbals clashes" a bit with the main melody, from 2:07 secs to 3:03 secs. Tone down the cymbals a bit, or give it a "ducking," type effect. So it and the Melody wouldn't clash too much.
Then again, it could be my speakers. They are quite oldish. Lol!

The ending from 3:51 secs to 4:21 secs is okay, but add in some building up fast beating Drums to make it sound more epic. And end it with a single Cymbal type Clash which you used in your song, at the end if you want.

All in all, nice work dude!

[maddogfinland]

Thanks!
These songs are really old work. Just earlier job. I do not remember what I've made at the time. Waldo's break at the end of the damage . Sorry for my bad English skills. Nice if you like!