first project lmms

[vjncye]

Hi, this is my first project with lmms, and my first electronic music composition. I don't know what genre this would technically fall under. If you guys could let me know what you think, what I could do better, and what works. Constructive criticism welcome

Here is the link:

https://youtu.be/aQWjmhqehnQ

https://soundcloud.com/vjncye-music/jeje

Thanks and hope you enjoy!

vjncye

[lauren7hope]

Wow, great work, especially for your first project w/ lmms! I really like it, it has such a beautiful, sunny vibe, and a strong melody too.

I like the different sections you had going, you had some great variety there to keep it interesting. The only real thing that I might think about would be making the build-ups a little more clear- sometimes it was hard for me to tell in what direction the piece was moving.

I know absolutely nothing about electronic genres, so can't help you there, but whatever it was, it sounded good!

[Gps]

I would call it EDM Electronic dance music.

Good job for youre first project.

[brandystarbrite]

Nice music!
It sounds a bit like a joyful version of Progressive House music.
With some danceynessly sunny sunsetty cool vibes to it!
I like how it changes often, but still keeping the same style.
Very well done.
It was very enjoyable and fun to listen too.

[musikbear]

this is good. You have a great production and melody, with good balanced instruments. Maybe a tad too long

[vjncye]

sorry if my English is not very good:

thanks guys , I'm glad you like it , this is my first composition of electronic music in general , as well as with lmms . I was encouraged by a friend to try to write something and publish it. I'm new to this kind of music; I play rock, metal, etc ... but lately I think of these sounds and discovering lmms has opened a new world.

The only real thing that I might think about would be making the build-ups a little more clear- sometimes it was hard for me to tell in what direction the piece was moving.

lauren7hope, thanks for your advice . I have yet to understand how to make a good build-up actually (the truth is that I haven't clear ideas). I tried to time to fill some steps working on cuts in frequency oscillators, but I can not get the sound I want and in terms of melodic'm honestly not very knowledgeable,I "go to ear".

Ps: I heard some of your pieces. really beautiful, you have a voice really interesting , and I really like the atmosphere, very good

Nice music!
It sounds a bit like a joyful version of Progressive House music.
With some danceynessly sunny sunsetty cool vibes to it!

brandystarbrite, thanks I hear these kinds of material that you suggested, if you want to advise artists or songs accurate I would be grateful.

I would call it EDM Electronic dance music.

Gps, thanks if you have any advice for me, you feel free

[vjncye]

this is good. You have a great production and melody, with good balanced instruments. Maybe a tad too long

musikbear, thank you, to be honest I admit that it is actually a bit too long, maybe I will try to shorten the transitional parts;I am not very knowledgeable. I just heard some of your pieces, very interesting! And I really like the intro InTranceNr2 excepts