What is missing?? - Delay project

[GoAm]

If anyone is interested, please have a try at: https://soundcloud.com/goam/im-delayed
Would love to hear what's missing or just messed up.

[Snarf]

Cool track. I liked the distorted vocal sound effect. One thing I would change is the chord progression at the break. At first it was a nice variation, but since you stuck with the same chords it kind of lessened the effect.

[brandystarbrite]

Wow! This sounds very 80's Terminator/Blade Runnerish.
It would definitely fit into those movies well.
Note: I never saw Blade runner. I was too small. Lol!
And strangely, I was thinking about checking out this Blade Runner movie today. Lol!

Was that Delay Lama singing?

All in all, this is a Cool track.

If I figure out what's missing, or what could make this track more cooler, I'll make another post.

[GoAm]

@Snarf: Yeah, I had the same kind of thoughts but it was a bit late yesterday.
Thanks for input!

@Brandystarbrite: For sure it was the Mongolian Munk singing! To bad it's not fully automated though, one of the setting is not possible to change.

[musikbear]

If anyone is interested, please have a try at:

Welcome to the forum GoAm! First, For you all important links:
http://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=4740

Track
Nice rocky and well produced track! You know your way around a DAW :)
Its not all that common to hear rock inspired tracks, so this was a fresh wind.
I do hear a continuous 'snear' and wonder if the bass could be broken / syncopated somewhat, so this would be bouncier? Otherwise i liked it

[slipstick]

Works for me. It's a nice change to hear drums doing something interesting rather than just keeping time.

Steve

[GoAm]

I do hear a continuous 'snear' and wonder if the bass could be broken / syncopated somewhat, so this would be bouncier? Otherwise i liked it

Thanks for your input Bear!
Yeah, I know, the snares are a bit repetetive. For now I've only copied and pasted to get the base beat. This was also my intention to polish a bit on.

I will also look in to the base topic to see what can be accomplished.

Cheers!

[GoAm]

Made some changes, shortened it and saved it to another version though (Radio Edit).

Please have a try at: https://soundcloud.com/goam/im-delayedradio-edit