My song!

[Torvonic]

Being a "newish" user to LMMS (I've been using it for about 3 months) I would LOVE to have feedback on my songs. I am not fully used to all the controls (pardon if my equalizers are crappy) and am not that good at using the FX mixer. Anyways, enough chit-chat and lets listen to music! Oh, and I also have a Sound Cloud so you should go check it out! It's Torvonic@soundcloud

The two songs that I would like you to preview are: Rising Champion, and Ravemania. The links are here below

https://soundcloud.com/torvonic/rising-champion
https://soundcloud.com/torvonic/ravemania

EDIT: I recently upgraded Ravemania because of some transitions and some problems with the sounds making "scratchy noises."

[musikbear]

Being a "newish" user to LMMS

Welcome to the forum Torvonic! First, For you all important links:
http://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=4740

Champion : Very nice melody-line, but it makes me wait for some kind of culmination, but i only says that because the melodic part is very good!
However, you have clippings, and your frequencies fights Did you use the mixer and gave each instrument its own channel?

I made a video on using mixer, but it may be to simple for you
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xuT_Ok6o5Dc

Ravemania: Much better mix, and i really like your melodies. Fine track

[Foggy]

Thanks for sharing! These are really cool. I agree with Musikbear to a point on Champion- it does hit kind of a plateau, but it's still prooty dang good. The mixing sounds okay to me, (maybe a little on the flat side?) but I'm also not the best at utilizing filters to their full potential yet. Definitely practice with the FX mixer though, it's infinitely useful and once you get used to it it's pretty easy to manage! Ravemania is great. I gotta say, you're leagues ahead of where I was after using LMMS for a year. Very talent!

[brandystarbrite]

Rising champion. It sounds really cool.
The melodies used in this, are nice.

Ravemania is cool.
It sounds very Ravey. Ha! Ha!
Good melodies.
Nice soft drop explosion sound at 2:54 secs too.

[Torvonic]

Thank you all so much for everything. Turns out that I made an "over assumption," (lol) I've only been using LMMS for 3 or 4 months, (just checked out my sound cloud looked at my first song which is around the time I started using it.) Anyways, I just want to thank you all for your very supportive comments. It really helps when you have support from others who know what they are doing. I worked on Ravemania and edited some parts that were kinda "scratchy" if you know what I mean. Thanks again! If you guys have ANY tips on music making/production, PLEASE, give me some tips because I am fairly new to this stuff. you guys are GREAT! Thanks again!
-Torvonic

(p.s. how do you use the mixer to give each sample its own sample?)

[Snarf]

(p.s. how do you use the mixer to give each sample its own sample?)

wut

I don't know what you mean.