New Hybrid Genre Track

[woods alive]

So, I started working on a new song, I was kinda drawing from a few genres, including ambient, drum and bass, future bass, and a few videogame soundtracks. Any input about the track is appreciated.

Motion:
https://soundcloud.com/davisjacobym/motion-lis6316

[woods alive]

I just posted a newer, longer version of the track. I don't get why LMMS is giving me so much grief before the drums kick in, but the glitches won't leave. I'm working on cleaning up my laptop so it gets rid of those pops.

https://soundcloud.com/davisjacobym/mot ... ssion-demo

[brandystarbrite]

I listened to your 2nd link, the longer demo version.

https://soundcloud.com/davisjacobym/mot ... ssion-demo

I definitely like the chinese sounding string instrument, and the melody made with it.
Very lovely.
Also, nice bass sound.

This is a very lovely, well put together track.
Good work.

[Snarf]

You have a nice groove going on. I'm curious where the track is going— are you going to add a melody? Change the chord progression? Add a break?

[woods alive]

Not totally sure actually. I might just keep building it as a mellow, simplistic song. We'll see.