I need some feedback.

[FluffyBiscuit]

https://soundcloud.com/fluffyspektrum/bit-by-bit
-What do you think?

[Leche]

Hi FluffyBiscuit and welcome to the forums! For all important links, go here:
viewtopic.php?f=1&t=4740

This track was put together bit by bit . I can tell a lot of work was put into this. Though at 0:08 the synth has a bit of clipping, but it can be fixed. The piano thing at 1:08 is again, a bit bad in terms of quality and clipping, so just turn that down a notch. But otherwise, a nice track FluffyBiscuit

[mrlmmsguy]

I agree with Leche, there was some clipping here and there, but it was a pretty neat track. I will say though (this is just stylistic), I think the percussion could be better, I'd recommend taking some time to find some good samples, (you might like Ghosthack's stuff) and maybe adding a few drum fills here and there.
I've got a post of free, royalty free samples you might like:
viewtopic.php?f=4&t=4961
God bless and good day

[brandystarbrite]

This is nice.
Yep. I agree with both previous posters about the clipping noise.

The piano sound at 1:00 secs came out too loud and abruptly.
My suggestion is, that you should start the piano sound off softish, then gradually build up to a louder volume.
Think of it, as steps that lead to the top.

All in all, nice work.

[Foggy]

Yeah, aside from the clipping, this is a fun little groove. With a little polishing you've got yourself a winner here.