First attempt at a song

[djVortex]

Short, but better than everything else I composed.
https://soundcloud.com/user-257918447/life-original-mix

Comments?

[SonicSpeed]

Not bad.
But don't forget switching instruments a bit.

[djVortex]

Not bad.
But don't forget switching instruments a bit.

Do you mean to use a wide range of instruments or to use different sets of instruments at certain times?

[SonicSpeed]

Not bad.
But don't forget switching instruments a bit.

Do you mean to use a wide range of instruments or to use different sets of instruments at certain times?

Both of those things.

[djVortex]

Got it.

[brandystarbrite]

This is nice, for your first song attempt.
It shows, that you have an good idea, of how to make music.

You got alot of good advice on this Forum and on soundcloud too.
So my advice is.......

Add some Calf Reverb on that organ synth sound. It might make it sound fuller and a bit better too.

Also, lower the volumes of some of the instruments, a good bit. eg. the organ sound etc.
That way, you won't hear any clipping.
And, it would also prevent some sounds, from overtaking and drowning out others.