Groovy Growly Djent sounds

[Grey Walls]

I made this: https://soundcloud.com/grey-walls/nothing-yetwip


My brain thinks it's so good, that should be the whole song. But I disagree. I think it should have a bit more in it. Maybe a weird de-tuned solo? I dunno... Any feedback?

[brandystarbrite]

This music might not be my cup of tea.
But despite that, it has a nice ring to it.
I agree with you. It seems like somethings missing.
Like it needs something more, added in to it, to make it sound more complete.
But what could that be,........I have no idea.

But overall, sounding good dude.