I'm new here, so hello all. As a bit of a preface, I'm a trumpet player, have been playing for about seven years now, but I have a not-very-secret love of death metal. LMMS is appealing and easy to use, so I've taken it up as a bit of a hobby just to get ideas out, since I'm constantly coming up with new musical ideas.

My only passable attempt at a song (so far) can be found here. It's inspired by Gorod/Genghis Tron if anyone's familiar with them. I'd really appreciate any thoughts you have on the track, and I'll be sure to reciprocate if there's anything you'd like my opinion on as well.
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