Remake of old track "Electric Chug 2"

[Jogden139]

check it out, let me know what you think,, should be at least better than Electric Chug 1 because I'm runnin' outta minutes and I need to tear some tracks down...
https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-og ... ric-chug-2
Please like and/or comment(and at least follow)

EDIT: Heres a link to the original track from 3 months ago.. so I started with that project file:
https://soundcloud.com/justin-thomas-og ... ctric-chug

[musikbear]

different, need to ask one thing though. Did you deliberately use disharmonies and mixed scales? It can work, but most time it will create an irrie or disturbing feeling in the listener. If you meant to be inside a scale, then imo, you are not.

about scales
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEgx-_hMFYg

[Wormy300]

The background music is nice to hear but with the solo, it's doesn't fit imo. (perhaps due to it's difference of its tune.) I think that's the point of an electric chug I guess. (?)

[brandystarbrite]

In the first version, the instruments seem to be more, in tune/sync with each other.
Despite certain parts of the track, where there's the occassional, out of sync instruments.

In the second version, almost everything sounds a bit wildly all over the place.
Even some of the note pitches, don't seem to go well together.
Unless that was intentionally done to this track.

I believe, that is what musikbear meant, when he spoke about disharmony.

(perhaps due to it's difference of its tune.) I think that's the point of an electric chug I guess. (?)

You're on to something there.
Maybe that's really why, it's called electric chug. Ha! Ha!