-Pads at 0:13/0:14 are sort of surprising, put a lowpass on them and remove it slowly.
-Drum roll should have been at the same time as the 0:45 arpegg imo.
-Kick is good in the bass, but it lacks the highend.
-Removing the arpegg at ~1:25 isn't something I would have done.
-When the snare comes in, you really need a stronger kick (don't forget the offbeat bass either)
-2:00 Another shock. Yes, I know you want to merge it together, but merge it one at a time.
-2:44 That's how you stop everything. That transition was good. Drums afterwards still weak though.
General tips: 1. Make percussion (mostly kick) and bass more prominent
2. Add one thing after another, but if you want to remove something remove almost everything (like you did at 2:44), don't remove just 1 instrument and then later add it again.
Genre-wise, this is definitely trance. If that's what you wanted to get, you got it.
Keep in mind that I like your song, I'm just the kind of guy who only gives negative feedback because that's the kind that helps you. Don't be discouraged from me.