my first (hopefully presentable) music tracks

[DMS]

Hi anyone, this is my first post!!!

i've been trying to learn how to make something with LMMS for a while now, these are my first tracks people can actually listen to without having their ears bleed

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kQGMqGJq4Hc

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bFeMiK9JHOA&t=41s

i think they fit in the soundtrack / score / background category

feedback and constructive criticism are always very welcome

and thank you all for listening!!!

[musikbear]

You have nice instruments, and fine mix in Age of Fire and Water. I think of game-level / quest rpg, and there the length would be determined of the game. As relax-listen, it is long.
Gemstone has some distortion in the start, but thats propl just yT. Alsp very cinematic and big. Suited fine for game or maby movie credits
well done

[brandystarbrite]

Woohoo! Two epic tracks.

Age of Fire and Ice is an epic track.
I agree with musikbear, it really does sound like, it's for an epic fantasy game.
It's the first thing, that came to my mind, when I listened to it.

Gemstone is one unusual epic track, and the sound of it, puts it in a category of it's own.
I like the fantasy spinning star gemstone vid too. Very cool.

[DMS]

Thank you both very much!!! did you notice any big faults or things that can be improved?

musikbear yes it sounds slightly different on my computer, could be youtube or maybe the video editing software lowering the bitrate to contain the size...

[Gps]

Wow, I am impressed. Both tracks really sound good.