I am in no way an expert when it comes to music theory, however I think that the chord transitions should retain a little more harmony together throughout the piece; You did it successfully a few times, though, and I like the mood shifts you're going for. But the chords seem to be a little undecided and they don't successfully link the music as a whole unit. Now if I were an expert, I would be able to suggest types of chord progressions and key changes to utilize, but I'm not able to do so. I'd recommend listening to classical/orchestral music to get an ear for these things and study a little on music theory, if you'd like. Just my thoughts! Other than that, I feel like you have a potential soundtrack right here.