Forecast : What's the weather like?

[simplework]

I tried to make better and better.

I remastered many times. So this is the project.


----> https://soundcloud.com/simple_work/forecast

Listening and rating would b my pleasure!

[NoChord]

maybe a bit of reverb on the stereo synths at 0:21 and 1:45 really likeyour beat

[D.Ipsum]

Nice.

Personally, I'm not a fan of sounds that move quickly from left to right. With headphones, it disrupts me.

Overall, I feel this track as a good WIP, but I can't tell how to develop it.

[brandystarbrite]

The piano melody sounds too soft, then it has good volume, in some places of the track.

The percussion sounds, slightly overpower the piano melody.
I suggest slightly lowering the volume, of the percussion instruments, eg Kick drum, knocky wood instrument etc. so that it will give the piano melody, some more room.

I think after the 1st explosion sound, the piano after 48 secs, should be a bit louder.
But you'll have to lower the volume, of those same percussion instruments a bit.

The tune sounds good, it just needs some volume fixes.

[simplework]

Thank you for advice.
I should consider more about volume.