First EDM Song

[Anonymouqs]

I'm wondering how good is this for a song. I know the dynamics are somewhat off(what do you think?) Listen with headphones to experience panning.

What can I do to make it better?
Finally, what genre would you say this is?
PLEASE BE HEART-BREAKING A CRITIC! IF I GET TOLD THAT A CRAPPY SONG WAS GOOD, THEN I WILL KEEP PUMPING OUT CRAPPY SONGS, AND I CAN PUMP THEM QUICKLY...

THE FUTURE OF EDM IS IN YOUR HANDS!!!


Here's the song, it's called Syncopated.ogg
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6nost ... sp=sharing\


The song is public domain, I would ask you to credit this to "Anonymouqs" but whatevs, I'll always get ideas. I ask that you wouldn't say that you made this, and if you stole credit, I might speak out, but hey, public domain, no royalty, no attribution, whatevs Viewers like to know what the name of that good song is though ;D

[D.Ipsum]

You're welcome!

I'm wondering how good is this for a song. I know the dynamics are somewhat off(what do you think?) Listen with headphones to experience panning.

What can I do to make it better?
Finally, what genre would you say this is?
PLEASE BE HEART-BREAKING A CRITIC! IF I GET TOLD THAT A CRAPPY SONG WAS GOOD, THEN I WILL KEEP PUMPING OUT CRAPPY SONGS, AND I CAN PUMP THEM QUICKLY...

It is difficult to decide. The track stops when it is supposed to continue.
Volume management looks good.
I find the timbres interesting.
Three instruments may be few.
Personally, I do not appreciate fast and continuous panning movements.

THE FUTURE OF EDM IS IN YOUR HANDS!!!

I guess it's humor (?)

The song is public domain, I would ask you to credit this to "Anonymouqs" but whatevs, I'll always get ideas. I ask that you wouldn't say that you made this, and if you stole credit, I might speak out, but hey, public domain, no royalty, no attribution, whatevs Viewers like to know what the name of that good song is though ;D

About this concern, which I understand, for now, I think you should not worry.

[Gps]

I don't have a problem with being critical but, one problem with music is personal taste.

A lot of people seems to make trap music, and I don't like trap.
So even if they upload a very good trap track, I still wont like it.

I listened to you're track, and it too short, to get a good idea about what you want to make.
So I agree with D.Ipsum, it stops when it was about to start.

I think you have a nice idea that could work though.

[brandystarbrite]

Here's the song, it's called Syncopated.ogg
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6nost ... sp=sharing\

It a nice track.
But alot of more work, can be done to it and added to it, to make it sound better and longer.
It's also a bit too short. Keep working on it. Practice and improve.

PS: Welcome to forums Anonymouqs.