by
D.Ipsum » Sat Sep 16, 2017 8:44 pm
Nice one, intense.
I like the idea common to your last tracks (ostinato, intensity crescendo, etc.)
But ... (and please, the following is not free, it's a whip) ...
but I think this version is a bit long, a bit long in the sense that there is nothing new between 03m00s and 07m26s (end of the track), or at least, the variations are not sufficiently contrasted that for renew my interest, to keep my attention (I'd like to say "wow!" from start to finish).
Yet, everything is already there, in the track. There are some very interesting parts that you could exploit more, that you could even develop longer, like the effect of "gate" that appears for a few seconds around 05m35.
(in my words, I imagine you saying something like "ok, the track begins quite calmly, and it will end up in a kind of exlosion, loss of control, where each part comes out of the way, towards syncope, disintegration, saturation, an incredible broth that one does not understand but fascinates, etc. ").
In short, I believe that it is worth continuing to work on your track.
