Still trying to do instrumental rap

[s3mp1t3rno]

I'll just leave this here, can already call it instrumental rap? any tips? tell me what you think.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bs4cOkojcBw&t=

[D.Ipsum]

Hip-hop beat yes (rap refers to the performance of the rapper, the guy who puts the voice).

I like the groove of the piano.

[brandystarbrite]

This is rippin'!
That beat and the piano melody, are an awesome combination here.

The only thing, I could advise so far, is that the kick drum, need to be a tad stronger or louder.
Or ignore my advice, if you want.

But overall, good work so far.

[s3mp1t3rno]

Thank you all for the comments, I take note for the drums hehe.