I need your opinion on my latest beat

[IbbySquish]

Can I get some feedback on my rap beat. I also made a little hook to give you an idea of what type of rapper would rap on it.
The lyrics;
Bag fulla bud,
Smoking dat shit,
Weed not heroine,
I'm just toking on it,
(Sentences and words not in that order as I chopped it up and rearranged it)

Listen to Technicality [With Hook] IBBY SQUISH by Nearmusicbeats #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/n34rmus1cb34t5/t ... bby-squish

[D.Ipsum]

https://soundcloud.com/n34rmus1cb34t5/t ... bby-squish

Nice, I like the flute part. Maybe a little too much reverb to my liking.

[IbbySquish]

https://soundcloud.com/n34rmus1cb34t5/t ... bby-squish

Nice, I like the flute part. Maybe a little too much reverb to my liking.

Thanks. I've improved it a lot now.
Listen to Technicality instrumental by Nearmusicbeats #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/n34rmus1cb34t5/t ... strumental

[brandystarbrite]

Unique musical style ya got there. Especially when the flute plays.

Okay: The new version, needs a slight volume reduction.

[D.Ipsum]

https://soundcloud.com/n34rmus1cb34t5/t ... bby-squish

Nice, I like the flute part. Maybe a little too much reverb to my liking.

Thanks. I've improved it a lot now.
Listen to Technicality instrumental by Nearmusicbeats #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/n34rmus1cb34t5/t ... strumental

Yeah, this new version is better, musically, it speaks to me.

(although the lyrics do not bother me, I will not transmit them to the new shoots, the youth )

[IbbySquish]

Unique musical style ya got there. Especially when the flute plays.

Okay: The new version, needs a slight volume reduction.

Thanks, although, first time i made it everything was too quiet. When i imprinted it, i was on my tv speakers.

[IbbySquish]

Nice, I like the flute part. Maybe a little too much reverb to my liking.

Thanks. I've improved it a lot now.
Listen to Technicality instrumental by Nearmusicbeats #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/n34rmus1cb34t5/t ... strumental

Yeah, this new version is better, musically, it speaks to me.

(although the lyrics do not bother me, I will not transmit them to the new shoots, the youth )

Thanks. The lyrics are just filler. If someone actually wants to use the beat, buy it or whatever, I'll send them a copy without my rapping in it.