My First Song In A While

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Life gets so complicated but music always gives me peace. This is my first song I've posted in a while.

It's about hip hop. I wanted to give a new perspective to the conversation of hip hop. And this is my go at it. I'd appreciate if anybody would be willing to take time out of their busy lives to listen. Thank you.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jsUG5GoE3wk
I will give a little background before i give my opinion,

My favorite rap album of all time is 'The predator' https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Preda ... ube_album) by Ice Cube, that was when rap was still edgy and you could hear to anger against the political and social systems at that time.

Another couple of tracks I always loved were,

Shut em down – Public enemy
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2wOcOBjB3uU

Approach to danger – NWA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIzmo8FcbvU
(But for the most part I thought NWA were shite)

Disposable Heroes of Hiphoprisy - Television
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hD9pJzZ1XGI

Now your track while it being short, its very powerful, it has that serious edge to it I recall from older rap music like I have mentioned above.

The pace is fast, and thats why even though just two minutes, it feels like it says a lot.
I think its good, but I don't like trap, and the drums remind met too much of that.



Wow at Incorruptable, for posting a public enemy track I did not know yet.

Like the Television one, its so true......
nice track bro. the beats hard and the bars are even harder, so can't complain.

it's been good to watch u grow from just producing initially and moving on to experimenting more using your own voice etc. keep it up mate!
Pretty good beat I Like that The drums are sick!

I create a pack with some indian drum samples if you want to check it out for your compositions!
https://www.loopsamples.club/2019/09/in ... ad-10.html
Incorruptable wrote:
Tue Sep 03, 2019 4:59 pm
I will give a little background before i give my opinion,

My favorite rap album of all time is 'The predator' https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Preda ... ube_album) by Ice Cube, that was when rap was still edgy and you could hear to anger against the political and social systems at that time.

Another couple of tracks I always loved were,

Shut em down – Public enemy
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2wOcOBjB3uU

Approach to danger – NWA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIzmo8FcbvU
(But for the most part I thought NWA were shite)

Disposable Heroes of Hiphoprisy - Television
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hD9pJzZ1XGI

Now your track while it being short, its very powerful, it has that serious edge to it I recall from older rap music like I have mentioned above.

The pace is fast, and thats why even though just two minutes, it feels like it says a lot.
Thank you. You have a wonderful taste in music.
Gps wrote:
Tue Sep 03, 2019 5:34 pm
I think its good, but I don't like trap, and the drums remind met too much of that.



Wow at Incorruptable, for posting a public enemy track I did not know yet.

Like the Television one, its so true......
Thank you for the feedback.
beagle wrote:
Wed Sep 04, 2019 3:19 pm
nice track bro. the beats hard and the bars are even harder, so can't complain.

it's been good to watch u grow from just producing initially and moving on to experimenting more using your own voice etc. keep it up mate!
Thank you bro. We need to link up btw. You got Instagram? My @obnoxify.
fernandojosei123 wrote:
Wed Sep 04, 2019 3:52 pm
Pretty good beat I Like that The drums are sick!

I create a pack with some indian drum samples if you want to check it out for your compositions!
https://www.loopsamples.club/2019/09/in ... ad-10.html
Thank you. Can you give me a virus check?
obnoxify wrote:
Tue Sep 03, 2019 11:49 am
Life gets so complicated but music always gives me peace. This is my first song I've posted in a while.

It's about hip hop. I wanted to give a new perspective to the conversation of hip hop. And this is my go at it. I'd appreciate if anybody would be willing to take time out of their busy lives to listen. Thank you.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jsUG5GoE3wk
Wow! This is some really good work dude! :D
And that is some really good work, with the vocals too.
You're on a roll! :D