New song, need some reviews

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Hey everybody,
I've made yet another song and posted it up on my YouTube channel here:
https://youtu.be/BFbx8dlnz8I
I'd like to know what you all think about it. Is it good? Have I missed anything? Is there anywhere I can improve? You are producers too, and you know how helpful it is to get opinions on your songs, so if you have anything to say please do as it will help me in the long term.
I made a post on Reddit as well and I have been told that my kicks are weak :( but surely there must be other stuff, so I thought why not post on the forum itself. I'm open to all suggestions, so if you have anything throw it at me.
Also, I may be asking for too much, but if you want to hear my future songs as well, subscribe to the channel. It's a win-win!
Peace!
AK47 wrote:
Tue Oct 15, 2019 1:56 pm
Hey everybody,
I've made yet another song and posted it up on my YouTube channel here:
https://youtu.be/BFbx8dlnz8I
I'd like to know what you all think about it. Is it good? Have I missed anything? Is there anywhere I can improve? You are producers too, and you know how helpful it is to get opinions on your songs, so if you have anything to say please do as it will help me in the long term.
I made a post on Reddit as well and I have been told that my kicks are weak :( but surely there must be other stuff, so I thought why not post on Spam links removed the forum itself. I'm open to all suggestions, so if you have anything throw it at me.
Also, I may be asking for too much, but if you want to hear my future songs as well, subscribe to the channel. It's a win-win!
Peace!
Doing good. Keep it up. Just some imperfections here and there but everything else is great.


Regards,
Shane
Thanks for your feedback!