New song, what do you think?

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Hey, I'm new to the forums, but have a song I want to show:

https://soundcloud.com/joshjeppson17/martian

Tell me what you think!
I think its a nice track, but am wondering if I hear clipping, in some louder parts?
Link is broken
I figure out that you changed your Soundcloud account (or something else) because the "user" (joshua-jeppson-472095933) doesn't exist.

By the original name + track details, I guess that this is your track -> https://soundcloud.com/joshjeppson17/martian

Please update your post with the correct link.
JoshJ wrote:
Mon Feb 10, 2020 5:17 am
Hey, I'm new to the forums, but have a song I want to show:

https://soundcloud.com/joshua-jeppson-472095933/martian

Tell me what you think!
Yeah, his track appears to be missing.
JoshJ wrote:
Mon Feb 10, 2020 5:17 am
Hey, I'm new to the forums, but have a song I want to show:

https://soundcloud.com/joshua-jeppson-472095933/martian

Tell me what you think!
Hey ! (:
The link doesn't work for me...

Can we see it in another place ?
Peace !
debardeur reggae, debardeur rasta
Yeah sorry, as was guessed, here is the correct link:

https://soundcloud.com/joshjeppson17/martian

I changed my URL on soundcloud to make it easier to share and forgot about this post. Sorry :)
JoshJ wrote:
Sat Feb 29, 2020 9:24 pm
Yeah sorry, as was guessed, here is the correct link:

https://soundcloud.com/joshjeppson17/martian

I changed my URL on soundcloud to make it easier to share and forgot about this post. Sorry :)
To be honest. This is an amazing tune dude.

Tips:

That knocking glass sound heard at 23 secs, add a reverb effect to it and tweak the dials. It'll make the knocking glass sound, sound a bit more airy and help it blend in, a bit better in the tune. And if you want, add in an echo effect to make it echo, if you want.

From 2:08 to 2:27 the volume drops low too suddenly. Automate the volume, to make it slowly decrease in volume, then automate it to raise up the volume.

Right before, 3:12 secs, put a semi loud rumbly crash sound, or a bass drop, to introduce the rest of the tune from 3:12 onward.

Overall, this is a nice track dude.