New happy hardcore remix. Any advice?

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Hello!

I'm MirkoDiTV, an EDM producer based in Europe especially interested in happy hardcore production.
My main inspiration source is S3RL, and I recently have been wanting to put together a happy hardcore album produced in my DAW of choice, LMMS.

I was wondering if you guys could check this out and tell me what you think of it: https://soundcloud.com/mirk0dex/tu-sei- ... vita-remix. It's a remix of an Italian church song: "Symbolum '77", by Pierangelo Sequeri.

Do you people on here have any advice for me? Should I change anything in the song or in my production techniques for my album to be good? (BTW, if you wanna check 'em out as well, you can find a few other songs from the album on my SoundCloud).

Many thanks in advance!
I wish I had the technical knowledge to find some nitpicks to give you advice on. As it is, I think it's a very high quality production in a genre I wasn't even aware of until now.