Dumsic - Night (LMMS Opus)

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Dumsic is back with the second installment of a trio of songs in volume 8, this time bringing us 'Night' in the form of light vocal chops and synthwave wubs.

Watch here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LaAtL-j7hyo

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What a nice atmospheric sound this song has. It has a very nice vocal lead synth, beautiful snares/kicks/hats/sweeps and a great (808?) kind of bass. It's very elaborate but put together extremely well. Exceptional mixing too! The vinyl crackle in the intro was also incredible.

Over all I'd say you're way more skilled than I am and you gave me some great inspiration.

The only improvement I could suggest is changing lead instruments and/or octaves with drum sound changes in the chorus to give even more variance. This can also make it sound more progressive (i.e building up to something) if that's what you're going for. That said it's more an easy listening song. I'm also kind of speaking to myself here as I feel "you can't have too much variety/change in a song."

Still, I'm a n00b so don't take my critique too seriously.

(Referring to Musicbear's template here: https://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=34376 )

- How is the Mix? 9/10
- Do I use good instruments? 8/10
- Does the song have good structure? 9/10
- Do you like the melody? 7/10

Overal Rating: 8.5/10

Keep up the amazing work and sorry to sound so 'judgy.' :-)
we'll pass this onto Dumsic, thanks for your support of our channel :)
I love the whole cherryish sound of this track. I like it.