I need your opinion and ideas!

[Musical_equine1239]

I am currently working on a beat for a project I am working on and I want your opinion. The link leads to one measure of the beat. Does anyone have any ideas of what I could add to make it better? I am new to this and I want to learn how I can improve my projects, so please be very honest with your response. (I think you'll have to highlight the link, then paste it in a new tab)

Mod: Link removed!

Never link to your homePC!
You need to upload at a site like bandcamp, and then link to that upload!

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[newtoon]

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Hi ! I'll be blatantly honnest : I think the link you provided is going straight to your hard drive (and no, hopefully, we can't access it from where we are )...