That's some nice music, it's cool there is a solo part at the ending . Could there be a better instrument selection? I think the kick is a bit too heavy sounding , and the crash is very distorted also if it's possible for the crash to be a note up ? maybe turning the volume down a bit for the crash or even add delay . Also i dont know if it's possible to make all the song brighter somehow with equalizer.
I don't know if it's just me but I think LMMS makes songs a bit flat or I don't know waht word to use , it lacks something like colour ? it's some secret I don't know about sound design . How to fix this ?