Should I stop before I go insane ?

[Gps]

I have added a bell sound, to the second part. At first very simple, but I was not happy with that, it was to simple. Then I added a few more notes so that the bell plays a simple melody, but not all of the time off course. Still struggling a bit with the volume, although I am already using automation.
Don't want to drown the bell in sound, but also don't want it to stand out too much.

Also trying to add a very small percussion part, to make the transition from the intro to the main melody more smooth.

[Gps]

Newer version:

https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/into-space-1

[brandystarbrite]

Newer version:

https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/into-space-1

This is really nice.
But I will be honest, I like the previous ambient sounding spacey version you did before.
It really sounded more like outer space cosmic ambient trance music.

The Bell is Awesome!!

The drums in this newer version, do add and make it sound really good, but the drums loudness, make it sound a bit different and give it a slightly different feel, from the previous version, you did before.
But still, this really sounds good.

I love the bell, and I love the Bell melody.
The Bell melody really completes this track.
Really cool.
If you want, maybe, lowering the Bells volume a bit, will help it meld with the ambient music of the track.

The boom drums 1:21 secs are nice. But personally (my preference) I find them a bit loud.
But they are not too loud though. Ha! Ha!
The boom drums loudness, kinda take away from the ambience of the music track.
Maybe a slight volume reduction might help?
Personally, I prefer slighty softer drums for this track. But not too soft.

But it's your music, not mine, so continue to your hearts content.

All in all, this is sounding really good.

[brandystarbrite]

Wait, now the drums sound softer.
Is my speakers working? Lol! O.O

[Gps]

Funny that you say this about the percussion. I think we agree. I noticed it being very soft, then made it louder, but might have overdone it.

I had already lowered the bell volume a lot, and will try to lower it even a tad more.

Prob just needs even more automation.

[brandystarbrite]

Okay, nice.

[Gps]

Wait, now the drums sound softer.
Is my speakers working? Lol! O.O

Lol make up you're mind

Maybe other can comment too. For now I think the percussion is a bit too loud for this track though.

[brandystarbrite]

For now I think the percussion is a bit too loud for this track though.

I agree.
And that is what I said in my not so super lengthly post.

But the percussion strangely started to sound softer, the 3rd time I played it, a while ago.
I guess my speakers are giving problems.
They are a bit dated.

[musikbear]

Newer version:
https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/into-space-1

Like it. You made 2 new variations, that make the track much more interesting.

[Gps]

@musikbear thank you.

@brandystarbrite. That's the problem with mixing. It will sound different on about every other speaker that is around.

Its also hard to set the right volume to listen. If I turn down the volume too much, there is less bass.
Too loud though, can damage you're ears, and or make you're ears tired.