Thank you, as always much appreciated.
I made those kick variations, because I thought that was what you meant, by more variation in the percussion. LOL
So the variation needs to be in the hats and or snares ? ( at least for trance ?)
Although I am starting to see that the bass line and percussion, are what makes it trance disco or reggae, I still struggle the most with the drums.
Why is my breakdown not a real breakdown though ? Too much happening in what I call the breakdown? Or is it the transition into the breakdown?
This variation 'invites' a key-shift
Que ?
You lost me on that one too.
About some variations not being subtle enough, I totally agree. I think that the snares are too loud at some parts. I am already using automation on the volume so that should be an easy fix.
Primo Lux - The Wall, that is a very good example of the type of trance I am aiming for. I will have to listen to this a few times, but I think I already hear the first time, what you mean

His or her changes are more subtle. His bass line (arpeggio) is also very interesting. Its a type of bassline I am trying to make.
I think I also hear, that its off beat ? You also mentioned something about that in a previous comment.
Totally don't like the scrape, bark ? sound (at 2.20), but I do like this track a lot.