feedback needed

[Gps]

Thank you very much.

Two questions though.

That 10 bar, was it out of scale? Did yo use the mark current scale tool to find this, or just you're ears?

Same question about the pads. They were out of scale (tune) ?

[brandystarbrite]

That 10 bar, was it out of scale?

Yep, the tenth bar notes were out of scale.

Did you use the mark current scale tool to find this, or just you're ears?

Nope. I used my ears for this one.
When I listened to it the 2nd time and it didn't transcend to the 11th note bars correctly,
I knew something was wrong.
Wait, there is a mark current scale tool in Lmms? How could I forget that.

Same question about the pads. They were out of scale (tune)

Well you made the pads correctly to coincide with the misplaced 10th bar notes.
When I refixed the 10th bar notes, I had to fix the pads 10th bar notes, to go in tune, with the Synth 1 refixed notes.
If I didn't do that, as soon as the play marker hit the 10th note bars, the pads and Synth 1 notes would have sounded, as if they were going in two different directions.
That was how it sounded, before I moved the 10th bar pads to the correct position.

Here it is Gps.
Grab it quickly, before someone gets it.
Here is the link:
https://lmms.io/lsp/?action=show&file=7798

I'll remove it as soon as you download it.
Enjoy!

PS: Sorry I took so long to upload it. That sharing platform gave me trouble for 2 days straight.
Glad it's working now.

[Gps]

Thank you, download the file, now I will have a look in lmms.

Very interested at that 10th bar. Did I use an unversed chord there ?
Or did I just totally mess up.

[brandystarbrite]

Thank you, download the file, now I will have a look in lmms.

Very interested at that 10th bar. Did I use an unversed chord there ?
Or did I just totally mess up.

Nah.
I wouldn't say you messed up.
It is sometimes very easy, to get confused and make mistakes, or misplace notes when you have a music track, with
lots of notes or chords etc.

[Leche]

Well you got help from various different people. Not sure how to help now

[Gps]

Well this is very interesting. I checked with the mark current scale tool, and my original chord was technically not out of scale.
It does look weird though, so I checked, it seems to be an inverted chord.
Its the same chord as the 11th chord, but it has the original top note, one octave lower.

I remember vaguely what I tried to do there.

First 8 bars chords go from first chord, down, down, up, If I remember right I tried to do that mirrored in the 9th 10th,11th and 12th bar.
But why did I change that chord ? Brandy's corrected version still has that mirrored thingy, but with a normal chord.

Easy fix though and again thank you.

[brandystarbrite]

Well this is very interesting. I checked with the mark current scale tool, and my original chord was technically not out of scale.
It does look weird though, so I checked, it seems to be an inverted chord.
Its the same chord as the 11th chord, but it has the original top note, one octave lower.

I remember vaguely what I tried to do there.

First 8 bars chords go from first chord, down, down, up, If I remember right I tried to do that mirrored in the 9th 10th,11th and 12th bar.
But why did I change that chord ? Brandy's corrected version still has that mirrored thingy, but with a normal chord.

Easy fix though and again thank you.

No problem Gps.
Glad to help.
We all did.

[Leche]

We did our best to help.

Your welcome Gps.

[brandystarbrite]

I must admit.
That Happiness track is really neat.
Very cool indeed.

[Gps]

Thank you, you "guys" might make an artist out of me yet.

Slowly I am starting to get songs out of lmms, like I wanted from the start. lol

It still is frustrating , but there is progress, that when I hum something, or hear something, I can't reproduce this in lmms.

Never give up, never surrender though is the way forward.

What really helped me, is downloading midi files from hits I like.

Seeing how it looks in a daw. Building a connection between what I hear and like with lmms.
Also watching many vids of people doing stuff in any daw, helps me.

Last video I watched was a guy in cubase making some dubstep within 10 minutes. Not really my music but still I learned from it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lA_qxkrpM0M
Funny part he is saying he hopes cubase wont crash.... I would be quite pissed off I had paid 600 euro for Cubase and then seeing it crash...