Hi Kate, welcome!
Looked at your composistion 'Town'
I think the lead should have more 'room' -Let it shine through. Now it is like it try to find an excuse, for being in the mix
-And exactly
that -
the mix, is something you need to work on.
Lmms let you allocate
each track to its
own FX-channel.
You have all pointing
to Master, and then you do not utilize lmms' features, that will let you controll
each instruments contribution to the total composistion.
I would suggest that you read
http://lmms.sourceforge.net/wiki/index.php/1.0:FX_Mixer
and perhaps also
http://lmms.sourceforge.net/wiki/index. ... _the_Mixer
(infact, read the whole wiki, if you havent already :p