My compositions

[saile]

This is where I'll post the stuff I make in LMMS. I love this program; there are so many possibilities with it. If only there was a record feature, for the sample track, it would be top notch stuff for free!

http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings/beat-1-evo

http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings/har ... ouse-remix (instrumental made in LMMS, vocals with Audacity)

http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings/wha ... ubstep-mix (same here)

[guy07]

First track was really well done. Nice beat. Second one i didn't really feel. But the third one had potential. You should of had a harder and faster beat with it tho, it sounds strange if you take a rock song and throw it in with slower rhythms like that. I'd be happy to be more specific on how to improve the third one if you're looking to fix it up at all.

[saile]

Sure, free advice is always good. I actually like the first and second tracks and think the third is kind of mediocre. But what are your suggestions?

[saile]

Another beat, named after the Organ plugin.

http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings/lmms-beat-2-organic

[bcman]

Beat #1 "Evo" sounds good! I like the plucked instrument and strings. The Ahhhhh sound at the end was unexpected, but seems to fit.

The Daft Punk remix is okay but I think the vocals seem to clash with the parts you added. I think the piano and/or percussion would make quite a nice song on its own. On the plus side, the vocals have good timing with the drums and melodies.

The bass in What I've Dub sounds pretty sweet, I think a harsher/grittier bass or add distortion might sound cool too. I love the wobbles! The vocals don't seem to fit somehow, I'm not sure why. Anyway, keep up the good work!

I also listened to Organic, nice laidback song! I like bass/kick as well as the extra little melodies you added to mix it up at bit at 20 and 45 seconds in. I love the happy part at 1:07! The silence at 1:18 was well placed too.

[saile]

Thanks! The wobble bass was made w/ the Triple Oscillator, and I used the Envelope maker thing with the 2x Low Pass Filter.
I made a third beat, but it's kinda weird. I was trying to mix trance and hip hop. I'm not sure if I was successful.
http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings/beat-3-trance-hop

[saile]

http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings/beat-3-gravity

[bcman]

Beat #3:Trance hop sounds decent! I prefer the trancy part but I've always preferred trance to hip hop. The trance part might sound cooler with a stronger sounding saw synth or it could sound neat if you layered the melody: copy+paste the melody then hit ctrl+up or ctrl+down in the piano roll. The part 1:20 seconds in was interesting! I think you got the genre right, it does kinda sound like a mix of hip hop and trance.

I listened to your Gravity tune too. I really like the main melody and instrument! The backing instruments and drums all seem to fit. This song has quite a happy mood

[saile]

http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings/bac ... sic-beat-4