New track, please be critical

[Gps]

I wonder if the lead is too loud compared to the rest. ( bell arpeggio part )
I tried to make something commercial. So its mend to get stuck in you're head.

https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/chart-attack

[slipstick]

I'm not sure what I'm hearing much of the time but overall it sounds pretty good. I'd like a little more bass in the mix (I used to be a bass player ) and I would probably have edited it down to around 3 minutes. It's a bit long for a commercial song and I can't hear anything very new happening after about 3 mins.

Steve

[Eino]

Bravo,
Well done, your cords match the melody perfectly. But I'am unfamiliar with this music.
But anyway it's your best yet.

[Gps]

Thank you guys.

I have already made the song shorter, and I am tweaking some synths.
I also changed one bass track, so I could turn up the bass, without getting distortion.
Like Tyree Cooper said, Turn up the Bass.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RNS9ipOcNBk