industrial-pop-synth on LMMS - feedback please

[farawayinspace]

Hi everyone!
This is my first publically available track made with LMMS (mostly using Zynaddsubfx, 1 OBXD, and lots drum samples)
https://soundcloud.com/rob-rankin-2/devils-dance-party
Its a type of dancy-industrial track with rock-sensibilities track.
Let me know what you think, especially any tips to improve before submitting to the best of lmms competition!

[EDIT:]
"Dance Mutha Fu<ka" Upbeat Industrial to dance to.
https://soundcloud.com/rob-rankin-2/dance-mutha-fuka
"Phrygian Industrial Complex" Eastern/arabic meets a TB303.
https://soundcloud.com/rob-rankin-2/phr ... al-complex
"Niotom Ni" industrial triphop like Massive Attack meets The Social Network OST.
https://soundcloud.com/rob-rankin-2/far ... -niotom-ni
"Give away and be free" I'm not sure what genre to call it: Downtempo, triphop, industrial-light?
https://soundcloud.com/rob-rankin-2/giv ... nd-be-free
"Apollo vided and demons" a new track, with Industrial/Dark House/Ambient vibes. Feedback always cherished!
https://soundcloud.com/rob-rankin-2/apo ... and-demons

[C_H]

Depeche Mode inspired?

I like it.

[Gps]

Great job really sounds good.

[Eino]

Not my kind of music, but it's truly unique, and has a good sound. .
It gave my sub-woofer plenty to do. lol

[farawayinspace]

Thanks for the thumbs up. I am glad someone thinks its unique because I just assumed everything today is derivative of the greats before us (Depeche Mode being one inspiration). I hope to add one more before the competition deadline.
Thanks again!!!

[C_H]

Depeche Mode with the musical engine Alan Wilder is not a bad influence.

[farawayinspace]

Here my latest, called "Apollo vided and demons". It has Industrial/Dark House/Ambient vibes. Feedback always cherished!
https://soundcloud.com/rob-rankin-2/apo ... and-demons

[musikbear]

it is a nice track. you have some very good deep sounds, and a intensifying buildup.
But then i miss the culmination. I expected something big around 1:30, and it does not happen. I dont know enough about the genre to know if it a common feature not to have a euphoria /crescendo, but i missed it :p

[farawayinspace]

it is a nice track. you have some very good deep sounds, and a intensifying buildup.
But then i miss the culmination. I expected something big around 1:30, and it does not happen. I dont know enough about the genre to know if it a common feature not to have a euphoria /crescendo, but i missed it :p

Yeah, you're correct. I struggle with those sorts of buildups. Maybe just a massive injection of distortion will do Thanks for the feedback Musikbear.

[farawayinspace]

"Give away and be free"
This is my latest LMMS track. I'm not sure what genre to call it: Downtempo, triphop, industrial-light?
https://soundcloud.com/rob-rankin-2/giv ... nd-be-free

Feedback would be much appreciated. Enjoy!