I am in desperate need of criticism! XD

[Douglas]

I'm having some troubles composing music, but I'm not sure what I have to do to improve. Please check out my Soundcloud and leave some comments of how I can improve. Make sure you watch the dates on those songs, there are some things I've fixed already. I feel like I'm getting better at mixing and mastering, but I definitely need help with instrument choice and song structure.

Here it is:

https://soundcloud.com/user-196788870

Thank you all!

[musikbear]

I cant find any of your track- link to one specific you like us to look at

[brandystarbrite]

I'm having some troubles composing music, but I'm not sure what I have to do to improve. Please check out my Soundcloud and leave some comments of how I can improve. Make sure you watch the dates on those songs, there are some things I've fixed already. I feel like I'm getting better at mixing and mastering, but I definitely need help with instrument choice and song structure.

Here it is:

https://soundcloud.com/user-196788870

Thank you all!

PSYCHOTRANCE This is a nice attempt at psytrance.
It definitely has potential.

UNDERTALE - Ghost Fight / Dummy REMIX Nice game music remix.
But I'm not a fan of the scary voice, that comes in a few times closer to the end though. Ha! Ha!

Electrojungle - 01 This track has potential. I like how this sounds.
Strangely, I think of a Sonic type game character, when I listen to it.

I noticed that alot of the effects, are almost hard panned, panned to the left speaker.
All this needs, is a little bit of mixing and mastering and a few volume reductions.
I'm hearing too many high frequencies in it.

The Song That Might Play When You Fight Sans Undertale REMIX
Very good melody and beat for a remix. It just needs a bit of fixing up.

Dubstep Derpstep Temstep Tem Shop REMIX
Nice remix. Just needs some mixing and mastering.

Papyrus's Circus (Remix Of Nyeh Heh Heh!)
Wow! This remix is long.
Nice job though.
How long did it take you, to render this track?

Project 2 (loop) [Made with LMMS] Now this loop sounds cool.
Good potential.

Dancing Mushrooms
This is one of you better tracks. I like the old school techno beat in it too.
A few slight volume reductions, will make this track sound better.
I like the old school techno beat in it. Potential it is.


Tip: All of your tracks, including the original ones, sound nice, but just need some fixing up.
eg. Mixing and mastering.

[Douglas]

I cant find any of your track- link to one specific you like us to look at

At my profile, it will have tabs saying:
"All
Tracks
Albums
Playlists
Reposts"

It stretches horizontally. Click "tracks" to see the music I've made.

[Douglas]

I'm having some troubles composing music, but I'm not sure what I have to do to improve. Please check out my Soundcloud and leave some comments of how I can improve. Make sure you watch the dates on those songs, there are some things I've fixed already. I feel like I'm getting better at mixing and mastering, but I definitely need help with instrument choice and song structure.

Here it is:

https://soundcloud.com/user-196788870

Thank you all!

PSYCHOTRANCE This is a nice attempt at psytrance.

UNDERTALE - Ghost Fight / Dummy REMIX Nice game music remix.
But I'm not a fan of the scary voice, that comes in a few times closer to the end though. Ha! Ha!

Electrojungle - 01 This track has potential. I like how this sounds.
Strangely, I think of a Sonic type game character, when I listen to it.

I noticed that alot of the effects, are almost hard panned, panned to the left speaker.
All this needs, is a little bit of mixing and mastering and a few volume reductions.
I'm hearing too many high frequencies in it.

The Song That Might Play When You Fight Sans Undertale REMIX
Very good melody and beat for a remix. It just needs a bit of fixing up.

Dubstep Derpstep Temstep Tem Shop REMIX
Nice remix. Just needs some mixing and mastering.

Papyrus's Circus (Remix Of Nyeh Heh Heh!)
Wow! This remix is long.
Nice job though.
How long did it take you, to render this track?

Project 2 (loop) [Made with LMMS] Now this loop sounds cool.

Dancing Mushrooms
This is one of you better tracks. I like the old school techno beat in it too.
A few slight volume reductions, will make this track sound better.
I like the old school techno beat in it.


Tip: All of your tracks, including the original ones, just need some fixing up.

Thank you so much for the feedback!

And about the creepy laugh... hee.
That laugh is actually a reference to the game I was remixing. It's the voice of Omega Flowey, and the stuff that plays right after is his theme.

Some other elements of my remixes are game references, also. For example, Temmie (runs the Tem Shop) is really derpy and weird, and the remix I made for the Tem Shop theme fits her personality. I also threw in her theme at the end of "The Song That Might Play When You Fight Sans Undertale REMIX", because it would be absolutely hilarious to anybody who's played the game.

I noticed that you didn't give any feedback for https://soundcloud.com/user-196788870/t ... -with-lmms. I really need feedback for that one, as not only is it my latest, but it is also my best. This song is quite humorous, because it mixes MEGALOVANIA (the super-intense song that plays when you're fighting the final boss, but only if you did genocide and killed everybody in the underground) and Tem Shop (super derpy annoying song). It also has a chiptune section in the middle, where it mixes in the melodies of (almost) all of the major characters in the game. You should listen to it, it is my favorite and my best!

[D.Ipsum]

I listened to about fifteen of your tracks posted on your LSP (https://lmms.io/lsp/?action=browse&user=Douglas).

If I can give you advice, you could personalize your tracks even more by synthesizing your own percussion elements. All the synthesizers of LMMS allow it.

This way may be long and difficult, but ... what a beautiful way.