Just want people to check my mix

[Markknightexeter]

Hi there, I've just started using lmms, it's very intuitive, I was used to logic 5.5 years ago and everything else seems too complicated. Anyway after years of not making music I have started again, I sent my track to a friend and he seems to the the mix sound's very wrong, I'm using some rubish PC speakers and various cheap headphones to get it right and just wanted other people's opinion. Just wondering if my friend is right really. Cheers, Mark

https://soundcloud.com/mark-knight-294600274

[brandystarbrite]

I sent my track to a friend and he seems to the the mix sound's very wrong, I'm using some rubish PC speakers and various cheap headphones to get it right and just wanted other people's opinion. Just wondering if my friend is right really. Cheers, Mark

https://soundcloud.com/mark-knight-294600274

Both versions sound okay to me.
And the sounds and instruments in both, are clear enough.
Meaning, that you did a good job, with the mixing so far.

I must admit, this short tune, really has a nice catchy beat to it too.