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Looking for criticism.
Posted: Fri May 19, 2017 10:34 pm
by StrawbearyJams
Started messing with LMMS about 6 months ago and ended up making a YouTube channel.
I'm looking to get some input on my newest song called 'Flow'. Thanks for taking the time!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QIA5X55lohw
or
https://soundcloud.com/strawbeary-jams/strawbeary-flow
Re: Looking for criticism.
Posted: Sat May 20, 2017 2:22 am
by H011IS
This is a really nice track!
Kind of laid back/chilled track, the only criticism I can really give is that the bass saw is maybe a bit too loud, but other than that there really isn't anything else. Nice job!
Re: Looking for criticism.
Posted: Sat May 20, 2017 2:51 am
by StrawbearyJams
Thanks! I'll be more careful of the bass from now on.
Re: Looking for criticism.
Posted: Sat May 20, 2017 8:08 pm
by Dudeguy21
This is really great! I especially love the panning effects. I agree with H011IS that the bass saw is a bit overpowering.
In my opinion, the snare is a little heavy in the intro, and could use a high pass filter. But later, during the main bit, it works well the way you have it.
It's really difficult to get a good ending with a song like this, and you absolutely crushed it. Hats off! Great work, I subbed and hope to hear more of your music in the future!
I have one question - where did you get the short vocal samples?
Re: Looking for criticism.
Posted: Sat May 20, 2017 8:55 pm
by StrawbearyJams
Dudeguy21 wrote:
This is really great! I especially love the panning effects. I agree with H011IS that the bass saw is a bit overpowering.
In my opinion, the snare is a little heavy in the intro, and could use a high pass filter. But later, during the main bit, it works well the way you have it.
It's really difficult to get a good ending with a song like this, and you absolutely crushed it. Hats off! Great work, I subbed and hope to hear more of your music in the future!
I have one question - where did you get the short vocal samples?
Thanks man! Yeah, I can see the snare being a bit loud in the beginning. I tend to get a bit of tunnel vision after messing with a song for so long. Much appreciate, my friend!
I got my samples from here:
http://www.musicradar.com/news/tech/sam ... les-275492
Re: Looking for criticism.
Posted: Sun May 21, 2017 1:34 am
by brandystarbrite
You got alot of good advice already, concerning the bass and snare etc.
So I have nothing to say.
Except, very cool nice track dude. And I like the vocal parts too.
Re: Looking for criticism.
Posted: Sun May 21, 2017 1:37 am
by StrawbearyJams
brandystarbrite wrote:
You got alot of good advice already, concerning the bass and snare etc.
So I have nothing to say.
Except, very cool nice track dude. And I like the vocal parts too.
Thank you, brandystarbrite! I appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment.