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Couple new tracks, need opinions.

Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2017 5:02 am
by Jbarn
For the most part these tracks are groovy.
Twitter however is not.
Check them out, leave a like and some feedback.
Much appreciated.
Also, again I feel like with a voice these would stand out more, but let me know what you think about that as well.

Links:

Twitter: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/twitter

Groovy: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/groovy

Movin on: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/movin-on

Re: Couple new tracks, need opinions.

Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2017 11:25 am
by D.Ipsum
Twitter: I like the lead, but without singer / rapper, it's a little empty for my taste.

Groovy: nice, there's more material than in Twitter.

Movin on: the link is broken ...

Re: Couple new tracks, need opinions.

Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2017 4:33 pm
by Jbarn
D.Ipsum wrote:
Thu Jun 01, 2017 11:25 am
Twitter: I like the lead, but without singer / rapper, it's a little empty for my taste.

Groovy: nice, there's more material than in Twitter.

Movin on: the link is broken ...
Appreciate the feedback.
Fixed the link, thanks for letting me know

Re: Couple new tracks, need opinions.

Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2017 5:05 pm
by D.Ipsum
Movin on: Nice. It sounds a bit like your track called Beamer.

Re: Couple new tracks, need opinions.

Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2017 2:09 am
by brandystarbrite
Jbarn wrote:
Thu Jun 01, 2017 5:02 am
For the most part these tracks are groovy.
Twitter however is not.
Check them out, leave a like and some feedback.
Much appreciated.
Also, again I feel like with a voice these would stand out more, but let me know what you think about that as well.

Links:

Twitter: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/twitter

Groovy: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/groovy

Movin on: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/movin-on
Twitter - is one of those tunes, that'll sound good with a singer added to it. :)

Groovy - This is definitely one of those, sit back and relax types of tunes. 8-)
Singer or not, who cares, this one sounds good, just as it is.

Movin on - Good track dude.
Personally, I think that the volume, on the cool piano sounding melody
that plays in the background, should be a small, tiny bit louder.
But you could ignore that advice, because it sounds good anyway. Ha! Ha! :D

Re: Couple new tracks, need opinions.

Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2017 2:35 am
by Jbarn
brandystarbrite wrote:
Fri Jun 02, 2017 2:09 am
Jbarn wrote:
Thu Jun 01, 2017 5:02 am
For the most part these tracks are groovy.
Twitter however is not.
Check them out, leave a like and some feedback.
Much appreciated.
Also, again I feel like with a voice these would stand out more, but let me know what you think about that as well.

Links:

Twitter: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/twitter

Groovy: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/groovy

Movin on: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/movin-on
Twitter - is one of those tunes, that'll sound good with a singer added to it. :)

Groovy - This is definitely one of those, sit back and relax types of tunes. 8-)
Singer or not, who cares, this one sounds good, just as it is.

Movin on - Good track dude.
Personally, I think that the volume, on the cool piano sounding melody
that plays in the background, should be a small, tiny bit louder.
But you could ignore that advice, because it sounds good anyway. Ha! Ha! :D
Appreciate the amazing feedback and comments.
More to come very soon, I think I might incorporate some of my own lyrics soon.
Trying to start maybe a new trend with piano type beats.
Well see what happens though, stay tuned!