Arcane - Newer Demo

[woods alive]

Once again, not the final product yet, but it is slowly getting better. Just looking for some feedback primarily on the melodies and composition. I intend to improve the mixing and percussion further down the line and remove/shorted other parts that are redundant eventually.

https://soundcloud.com/davisjacobym/aed4

[D.Ipsum]

starting at 02m12s, you could start playing higher, for example an octave higher

[brandystarbrite]

This is nice.
The plucky melody, that comes in from 25 secs and ends at 1:15 secs
should be a tiny bit louder.

[StrawbearyJams]

Overall, it has a nice melody.

As brandystarbrite said, the pluck could be a bit louder. Could also try to put a bandpass on it to knock off some of the lowness to make room for something else. Maybe a little reverb as well?

In regards to the composition, I think it's perfectly fine. I'll be interested to see the final product!