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Just want to share a track
Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2017 10:33 pm
by Cr. Klab
Hi everybody, I would like to receive some opinions about this track. I only used the triple oscillator and the kicker
https://soundcloud.com/creediidae-klab/persona-new-way
Re: Just want to share a track
Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2017 12:56 am
by D.Ipsum
I find it marvelously melancholic !
About the part that extends from ~1m15 to ~1m21, I was expecting it to be a bit longer (a little bit).
At the second listen, before the piano begins, I imagined something like a filtered noise to introduce the piano part, and something similar as an outro.
Re: Just want to share a track
Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2017 4:59 am
by Cr. Klab
Thank you, I will try to make these changes
Re: Just want to share a track
Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2017 7:24 pm
by D.Ipsum
I just noticed that you live in Italy.
So, is it your voice on the track?
If it's not an abuse on my part (tell me if it is), what is it talking about?
Re: Just want to share a track
Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2017 2:35 pm
by Cr. Klab
No, it's not me. I took this dialogue from the film "Persona" by Ingmar Bergman in its italian translation. The scene is this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ogAvPsqsNrE
Re: Just want to share a track
Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2017 3:27 am
by brandystarbrite
Quite a tune you got here.
And the piano playing, piano melody and beats sound nice too.