Couple new tracks, need opinions.

Share and discuss your LMMS music projects here, and see what people think!
For the most part these tracks are groovy.
Twitter however is not.
Check them out, leave a like and some feedback.
Much appreciated.
Also, again I feel like with a voice these would stand out more, but let me know what you think about that as well.

Links:

Twitter: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/twitter

Groovy: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/groovy

Movin on: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/movin-on
Twitter: I like the lead, but without singer / rapper, it's a little empty for my taste.

Groovy: nice, there's more material than in Twitter.

Movin on: the link is broken ...
D.Ipsum wrote:
Thu Jun 01, 2017 11:25 am
Twitter: I like the lead, but without singer / rapper, it's a little empty for my taste.

Groovy: nice, there's more material than in Twitter.

Movin on: the link is broken ...
Appreciate the feedback.
Fixed the link, thanks for letting me know
Movin on: Nice. It sounds a bit like your track called Beamer.
Jbarn wrote:
Thu Jun 01, 2017 5:02 am
For the most part these tracks are groovy.
Twitter however is not.
Check them out, leave a like and some feedback.
Much appreciated.
Also, again I feel like with a voice these would stand out more, but let me know what you think about that as well.

Links:

Twitter: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/twitter

Groovy: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/groovy

Movin on: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/movin-on
Twitter - is one of those tunes, that'll sound good with a singer added to it. :)

Groovy - This is definitely one of those, sit back and relax types of tunes. 8-)
Singer or not, who cares, this one sounds good, just as it is.

Movin on - Good track dude.
Personally, I think that the volume, on the cool piano sounding melody
that plays in the background, should be a small, tiny bit louder.
But you could ignore that advice, because it sounds good anyway. Ha! Ha! :D
brandystarbrite wrote:
Fri Jun 02, 2017 2:09 am
Jbarn wrote:
Thu Jun 01, 2017 5:02 am
For the most part these tracks are groovy.
Twitter however is not.
Check them out, leave a like and some feedback.
Much appreciated.
Also, again I feel like with a voice these would stand out more, but let me know what you think about that as well.

Links:

Twitter: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/twitter

Groovy: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/groovy

Movin on: https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/movin-on
Twitter - is one of those tunes, that'll sound good with a singer added to it. :)

Groovy - This is definitely one of those, sit back and relax types of tunes. 8-)
Singer or not, who cares, this one sounds good, just as it is.

Movin on - Good track dude.
Personally, I think that the volume, on the cool piano sounding melody
that plays in the background, should be a small, tiny bit louder.
But you could ignore that advice, because it sounds good anyway. Ha! Ha! :D
Appreciate the amazing feedback and comments.
More to come very soon, I think I might incorporate some of my own lyrics soon.
Trying to start maybe a new trend with piano type beats.
Well see what happens though, stay tuned!