Arcane - Newer Demo
Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2017 4:49 pm
by woods alive
Once again, not the final product yet, but it is slowly getting better. Just looking for some feedback primarily on the melodies and composition. I intend to improve the mixing and percussion further down the line and remove/shorted other parts that are redundant eventually.
https://soundcloud.com/davisjacobym/aed4
Re: Arcane - Newer Demo
Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2017 8:08 pm
by D.Ipsum
starting at 02m12s, you could start playing higher, for example an octave higher
Re: Arcane - Newer Demo
Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2017 8:26 pm
by brandystarbrite
This is nice.
The
plucky melody, that comes in from
25 secs and ends at
1:15 secs
should be a tiny bit louder.
Re: Arcane - Newer Demo
Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2017 1:05 am
by StrawbearyJams
Overall, it has a nice melody.
As brandystarbrite said, the pluck could be a bit louder. Could also try to put a bandpass on it to knock off some of the lowness to make room for something else. Maybe a little reverb as well?
In regards to the composition, I think it's perfectly fine. I'll be interested to see the final product!