Electronic Track I want to share

[Kargo]

Hi, I mostly do performing arts in my life and I'd like to get familiar with producing so that I can make the music for my own shows.

Here it is: https://soundcloud.com/user-731156591/120617a

Welcome to any feedbacks!

[D.Ipsum]

Nice track, it's like entering a machine.

The track could last a little longer.

[brandystarbrite]

Hi, I mostly do performing arts in my life and I'd like to get familiar with producing so that I can make the music for my own shows.

Here it is: https://soundcloud.com/user-731156591/120617a

Welcome to any feedbacks!

Not my type of music. But you're definitely on to something good here.
I'd say, more can be added to it and more can be done to this track, to make it sound more cooler.
Also, since you're new here, welcome to the forums Kargo.