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Rise Up - ( Prod. Jbarn )

Posted: June 19th, 2017, 7:37 pm
by Jbarn
I think this one is interesting, but let me know what you think on it.
Comment here or on the Cloud and I'll respond.
As always, I think vocals on here would make it better.

https://soundcloud.com/jbarn97/rise-up-prod-jbarn

Re: Rise Up - ( Prod. Jbarn )

Posted: June 20th, 2017, 8:35 pm
by D.Ipsum
From the 55th second, I think you can start bringing new elements (a new synth, an additional melody, a rhythmic modification, or whatever).

Re: Rise Up - ( Prod. Jbarn )

Posted: June 21st, 2017, 4:07 am
by brandystarbrite
Yep. This one sounds nice and interesting. And has a good beat to it. :)
Personally, I think the snares should be, a bit stronger in this.

Yep. Vocals would sound good in this tune.
But like some of your other tracks, this is one of those good tunes, that can hold it's own
with or without vocals. :)

Re: Rise Up - ( Prod. Jbarn )

Posted: June 26th, 2017, 3:22 am
by Jbarn
D.Ipsum wrote:
June 20th, 2017, 8:35 pm
From the 55th second, I think you can start bringing new elements (a new synth, an additional melody, a rhythmic modification, or whatever).
Agreed, that's my new mission with all beats =D