Song I randomly made

[TvHead]

Hey! I just made this song, and was wondering if I can get some thoughts on it so that I can improve. (I'm still kinda a noob)

https://soundcloud.com/user-130037238/netn-tvhead

[D.Ipsum]

I like the effect that plays at the same time as the kick, I like this track. Do you plan to expand it further? (it's a really nice track)

[TvHead]

I like the effect that plays at the same time as the kick, I like this track. Do you plan to expand it further? (it's a really nice track)

Thank you! Also, yes, I'm planning on expanding it in the soon, to about three minutes.

[D.Ipsum]

Keep us in touch, it is a pearl.

[MorganEAshton]

That was really cool! The build-up is great, and I love the little break at 0:42. This could be really, really good if you eventually build it up to a big drop.

[Dudeguy21]

Hey! I just made this song, and was wondering if I can get some thoughts on it so that I can improve. (I'm still kinda a noob)

https://soundcloud.com/user-130037238/netn-tvhead

This is incredibly creative, and with some development could be a masterpiece. I especially like the sound that plays with the kick.

However, there is a lot of empty space that could be filled with drum fills (I guess that's why they're called that), extra (quiet) parts, and some reverb on the instruments and percussion that you already have in place.

I'm excitedly waiting your update, and hope you continue to make more songs in the future as you obviously have some great ideas.

[insonico]

Hey TvHead

It's really interesting how your tracks flow into each other nicely. They have kind of a unifying character to them.
The link no longer works. I hope that means you're just reworking the track.