First go with LMMS

[jacobf]

I just found out I could use my Casio piano as a midi out - so here comes my first little LMMS tune

https://soundcloud.com/jacob-ferrero/jumpy-bop

Might use it for a game or something

[musikbear]

First go with LMMS
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Might use it for a game or something

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Its a neat little tune you have there. I like that you are in key, and that you are play-full with the pitch. It is very short, but yes it could be for a level in a retro-game. I would suggest that you tried to expand it, to ~3 mins. That is a good exercise, because it is this part that is the hardest - Making longer but cohesive pieces, and As it is now, it would be 'disturbing' looping in the background of a level :p
Also i think it comes closer to chip-tune than dance/edm, as genre

Looking fwd to more of your tracks.

[D.Ipsum]

I agree with musikbear, it would be nice to extend the track.

In this version, you stopped talking at the moment you were going to develop something (just my feeling).

[brandystarbrite]

Cute boppy sounding track.
It definitely sounds like, it's for a Jungle type game stage.

Adding to what the others have mentioned above: I say extend it and add in some more parts.