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Hello !

As said in the "influences" topic, I am fond of ambient artists such as Boards of Canada or Aphex Twin.

So I really want to improve my skills in this style.

Here is my latest piece. Took 3-4 hours to produce, I have been messing around with some automation tools. I let you guess which ones.

Comments and critic will be appreciated as always,

thanks

https://soundcloud.com/marvin-shmn/atmospheric-viby

qantuum wrote: ↑

Sun Aug 06, 2017 6:16 pm

https://soundcloud.com/marvin-shmn/atmospheric-viby

Okay:
From 1:27 secs to 1:56 secs and later on in the track, I hear a slight bit of distortion noise
with the bass drum type sound.

And from 2:05 secs, the rumble noise sound, needs a tiny volume reduction.

Also, the track seems to be missing something, special in it. I have no idea what that is. Lol.

So far, it's a nice track ya got there.
If you refix, or add in new/more stuff to this track, feel free to repost it here, so we could listen to it.

Hi !

Thanks again for reviewing my production

I do not get the distortion between 1:27 and 1:56; does it means the bass drum you talk about is too loud somehow ?

For the rumbling effect at 2:05 the volume was intended, but of course if it is too aggressive I can put it lower.

By listening to the track, I would not have made the connection with RDJ and BoC.
But that does not detract from the interest of the track.
In particular, I enjoy the drums section.
By cons I bugged on the explosion that appears at 02m05s.

Nice track

qantuum wrote: ↑

Mon Aug 07, 2017 5:11 pm

I do not get the distortion between 1:27 and 1:56; does it means the bass drum you talk about is too loud somehow ?

Yep that sound.
Maybe the distortion could be caused, with the bass drum clashing with another sound
or it could be, that it's too loud.